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Mistress of the Art of Death by Ariana Franklin

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Mistress of the Art of Death by Ariana Franklin

Post by EC2 » Thu November 6th, 2008, 12:03 pm

In Cambridge a child has been hideously murdered and other children have disappeared. The Jews, made scapegoats by the all powerful Christian clergy have been forced to retreat into the castle to avoid slaughter by the angry townspeople. Henry, King of England is displeased. The Jews provide a large part of his revenue and therefore the real killer must be found and quickly,. A renowned investigator, Simon of Naples, is recruited, and arrives in town from the Continent accompanied by an Arab and a young woman, Adelia Aguilar.
There are few female doctors in 12thC Europe but Adelia is one of them, having qualified at the great school of medicine in Salerno. What's more, her speciality is the study of corpses; she is in fact a mistress of the art of death, skill that must be concealed in case she's accused of witchcraft. Adelia's investigation takes her deep into Cambridge, its castles and convents, and in a medieval city teeming with life, she makes friends and even finds romance. And fatally, attracts the attention of a murderer who is prepared to kill again...
On the one hand I enjoyed this novel very much. Ariana Franklin is a consummate story teller and her characters and the setting in which they act and react are wonderfully realised. You can actually believe you are there with them. There are some delightfully realised secondary personages. I was particularly fond of eelwife Gytha and her cheeky urchin son, Ulf. Henry II is spot on and I really warmed to Ariana Franklin's version of this fiercely intelligent king with his mingling of imperious authority and the mischievous common touch. It's a page turner, no doubt about it and for all the above reasons I would be glad to give it five stars.
However.... Abandon any hope of historical veracity when you come to this novel. There are the usual detail errors that irk me because I know my 12th century. Mention of brandy and laudanum which were not available in the Middle Ages - so therefore some of the scenes could never have happened. Henry II talking about his billiard table (conjures a hilarious image of Henry with his cue in hand leaning over a table in the smoky fug of a bar!) or having his head referred to as a cannon ball, yanked me out of the story. There are errors peppered throughout the novel both the large and the small, of detail and of mindset.
The heroine is a woman of 21st century sensibilities, who also acts like a 21st century TV forensic expert. There's a moment when she comes to examine her first victim when she garbs herself in the medieval equivalent of scrubs and with an assitant to write down the findings with chalk and slate begins: 'The anger went out of her voice and she began speaking in a monotone. 'The remains of a young female. Some fair hair still attached to the skull...' At this point I burst out laughing because it was so preposterous. The author tells us that Salerno had a body farm where pigs were killed and buried in different circumstances and seasons so that the students could observe the various states of decay. This again caused much mirth. I have the kind of mind that wonders about practicalities too. At the beginning of the novel, Adelia saves the life of a prior by draining his swollen bladder using a straw catheter. Said prior then makes a full and complete recovery and is a perky, helpful chap as the novel continues. But to have that condition in the first place speaks of serious underlying problems. So to have him one moment dying of a blocked bladder and the next fit as a flea just doesn't ring true.
The best way to read this book if you are at all sensitive about historical veracity, is to lock up your disbelief before you begin reading. Make a pact to treat AF's medieval Cambridge as an alternative world and you will really enjoy this novel. I give this 10 out of 10 for characterisation, atmosphere and page turning quality, 6 out of 10 for the mystery element and 3 out of 10 for historical accuracy. Three stars I think to average things out.
Last edited by EC2 on Thu November 6th, 2008, 4:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Les proz e les vassals
Souvent entre piez de chevals
Kar ja li coard n’I chasront

'The Brave and the valiant
Are always to be found between the hooves of horses
For never will cowards fall down there.'

Histoire de Guillaume le Mareschal

www.elizabethchadwick.com

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Post by Misfit » Thu November 6th, 2008, 12:45 pm

Henry II talking about his billiard table (conjures a hilarious image of Henry with his cue in hand leaning over a table in the smoky fug of a bar!) or having his head referred to as a cannon ball, yanked me out of the story
:D :p :) Surprised you made it to the end, although if an author can craft a good tale they can keep me interested even if some of it is all hooey like this one.

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Post by EC2 » Thu November 6th, 2008, 12:57 pm

[quote=""Misfit""] :D :p :) Surprised you made it to the end, although if an author can craft a good tale they can keep me interested even if some of it is all hooey like this one.[/quote]

It's really difficult Misfit. Some of the historical material is right on the nail and she has a Penmanesque way of getting at Henry II and his relationship with his people and barons. That part is spot on and constitutes the 3 points it gets for historical accuracy. The writing style is just so zestful and tremendous that it carries you along despite the hair-tearing and reaching for the gin. That was what kept my wall from damage. :D :p I am not sure if I'd be able to stand the next one though - the poisoning of Rosamund Clifford.
Les proz e les vassals
Souvent entre piez de chevals
Kar ja li coard n’I chasront

'The Brave and the valiant
Are always to be found between the hooves of horses
For never will cowards fall down there.'

Histoire de Guillaume le Mareschal

www.elizabethchadwick.com

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Post by Misfit » Thu November 6th, 2008, 1:18 pm

I am not sure if I'd be able to stand the next one though - the poisoning of Rosamund Clifford
There's going to be more? Interesting what I just found on a review on Amazon,

A little investigation turns up that this is a pseudonym for Diana Norman.

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Post by EC2 » Thu November 6th, 2008, 2:03 pm

[quote=""Misfit""]There's going to be more? Interesting what I just found on a review on Amazon,[/quote]

Yes, there's another one if not a third. Forgotten the title of no 2 but something to do with a maze - in the USA anyway. That review more or less agrees with mine. The anachronisms are :eek: :eek: :eek: but somehow it's not a wallbanger. I'd forgotten about the cholera - and the heroine sussing out its cause. That was where the brandy came in - for washing in to sterilise.
Les proz e les vassals
Souvent entre piez de chevals
Kar ja li coard n’I chasront

'The Brave and the valiant
Are always to be found between the hooves of horses
For never will cowards fall down there.'

Histoire de Guillaume le Mareschal

www.elizabethchadwick.com

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Post by LCW » Thu November 6th, 2008, 4:31 pm

[quote=""EC2""]The writing style is just so zestful and tremendous that it carries you along despite the hair-tearing and reaching for the gin. [/quote]

LOL!!! That was basically my final thoughts on the novel as well. Great writing, loved the secondary characters, but scenes of CSI kept popping through my mind as I read the story. I ended up giving it 3 stars, I think.
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Post by chuck » Thu November 6th, 2008, 5:06 pm

[quote=""ec2""]it's really difficult misfit. Some of the historical material is right on the nail and she has a penmanesque way of getting at henry ii and his relationship with his people and barons. That part is spot on and constitutes the 3 points it gets for historical accuracy. The writing style is just so zestful and tremendous that it carries you along despite the hair-tearing and reaching for the gin. That was what kept my wall from damage. :d :p i am not sure if i'd be able to stand the next one though - the poisoning of rosamund clifford.[/quote]

to all.... Excellent reviews and comments....odd... Because of my liking adelia, her associates and the plot... I'm enjoying the book....my bias will tend to overlook peculiar out of place things and out of date author meanderings....cheers.....p.s. Wouldn't a proof reader friend with a good eye for facts challege the author/?

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Post by EC2 » Thu November 6th, 2008, 5:16 pm

[quote=""chuck""]to all.... Wouldn't a proof reader friend with a good eye for facts challege the author/?[/quote]

The thing is that there aren't that many proof readers/editors out there with an eye for that sort of thing. If she'd had Richenda Todd for e.g. then perhaps, but editors like Richenda are few and far between. My commissioning editor wouldn't know if I made mistakes such as the use of brandy. It's up to me to get it right. I think all the forensic malarky is to give it more immediacy for the current market and is deliberate. Both author and editor/s will know that really it's a load of baloney. That's where a wider suspension of disbelief comes in. It makes for a good story type of thing, so who cares if it could never have happened?
Les proz e les vassals
Souvent entre piez de chevals
Kar ja li coard n’I chasront

'The Brave and the valiant
Are always to be found between the hooves of horses
For never will cowards fall down there.'

Histoire de Guillaume le Mareschal

www.elizabethchadwick.com

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Post by annis » Thu November 6th, 2008, 7:23 pm

Maybe for readers of HF a certain degree of ignorance is bliss, as we're not dragged out of the story by details that annoy someone like EC, who knows they're anachronisms!

I love Diana Norman's characters- the strong, stubborn and rather stroppy female leads and the many quirky and often forthright secondary characters. I have to admit though, that I was a bit stretched with "Serpent's Tale" which felt a bit overwrought and contrived at first, though I did settle into the story as it went on. I felt distinctly disloyal- didn't think I'd ever find myself feeling impatient with DN!

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