[quote=""MLE""]Faith, do you feel that JKR could really have used some serious cutting on the last several books? To me, they seemed quite slow in the middle and unnecessarily convoluted.[/quote]
Definitely! Starting with the
Goblet of Fire, I got the feeling (as a reader and writer) she was "too big for an editor." In other words, no one would stand up to her. Although, I remember at the time she was rather angry that she was being pressured to get GoF out. Even she thought it needed a good comb through and vowed not to rush again.
My take on it, is that JKR locked herself into a "time" format starting each book with Harry's summer/birthday and ending with the end of term at Hogwarts. She uses a linear style and the months just drag by when there's nothing going on and she's trying to fill. GoF was almost a wall-banger for me--a wizarding contest that takes a whole school year for three challenges? Really? The last four books could each have been a couple of hundred pages shorter. With
Deathly Hallows, even though the kids aren't in school, she slavishly stuck to the same time frame and had them spending months moving from one camp site to another, on a fruitless quest, with not enough action/character development to keep things going until the big climatic battle in the spring. That's where I am now and skimming ferociously. If she was ever to break out of her self-imposed prison, this was the one, however...she's the billionaire and I'm not even subsisting on my Kindle checks, so who am I to criticize!
