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by Rowan » Thu January 13th, 2011, 6:24 pm
[quote=""Kveto from Prague""]I just started reading a new book written a few years ago. It is set in 3rd century rome. Then right there on page 5, a pratorian guard tells a messanger to "Go **** off."
It jarrs me right out of the narrative. not for any puritanical reasons. it just feels so blarringly modern. I know that we are supposed to guess that the character was using roman/latin equivalent of the time but it just feels too modern. makes you instantly remember that you are reading a book written in 2008 not a story set in old rome. on me, it has the worst effect that it could elicit, reminding the reader that this is just a book.
For the record, its not the f-bomb that turned me off. id have had the same reaction if the roman would have said "groovy" or "whizzo" or "bling-bling". whether or not "****" is an ancient word, it just feels too modern. Would it be so hard for the author to try to find an insult which would sound a bit more authentic?[/quote]
That's it exactly Kveto!!!