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by fljustice » Mon January 21st, 2013, 6:12 pm
Let me say up front, this is one of those occasions of a mismatched reader, not that I felt this was a bad book. I had high hopes for The Winter Sea because so many folks, here and on GR, loved it. I should have read the reviews a little more closely. The research is excellent and the writing fluid, but I'm not much of a romance fan and I like a little action in my stories. This book was too slow and dreamy for me. Nothing much seemed to happen for pages and pages and pages. When there was some action, it was usually "off stage" and relayed through a third person's narrative. If action did happen to the protagonists, it rarely had the immediacy I expected. (I've personally lost control of a horse racing for a cliff in Scotland and, believe me, it's a lot more heart stopping than Kearsley described.)
The historical thread did have some small elements of tension, but I found the heroine mild; rarely taking action for her own or other's sake and, when she did, her decisions annoyed me. Everything came much too easily to the modern protagonist: romance, friendship, even writing (she only had to "remember" her ancestor's story and write it down!) All the "good" characters are so very, very good. No one had any faults. I found the secret romance (in both threads) to be a contrived plot devise that didn't serve the plot by providing enough tension to move it forward. I grew up with brothers brawling (literally) and my husband (in spite of an older brother) considers himself an only child. Where there's testosterone and a female there are sparks, physical and/or emotional. I'm not saying that brothers can't get along, that neighbors can't be nice, that writing can't be easy. I'm saying (for me) it makes for boring reading. I find conflict and tension are the heart of character development and plot. There just wasn't enough to make this a compelling story for me.
I almost stopped reading, but several people encouraged me to finish. I'm glad I did, because the ending to the historical plot almost redeemed the book...not quite because the modern thread still bored me...but enough that it wasn't a total loss. I didn't write this review to "trash" this book, but to provide a bit of perspective, so prospective readers who share my love of action won't be disappointed. Obviously, it appeals to a large segment of readers. I found the history fascinating and language lyrical. The plot and characters just didn't grab me.